Friday, March 7, 2014

Covert Review Book 6

This is my second covert review from this author. And probably my last. It had a lot of the same issues as the last one. Way too much narration and it wasn't able to to carry the pacing in spite of so much telling the way the first one did. I still enjoyed it but I read another book in the middle of it, so I was obviously able to put it down. I didn't find the characters as easy to relate to this time around either. That being said it wasn't a horrible book either. The deal breaker came when I realized those same mistakes had surfaced in my own writing. WHAT? NO!! I make enough of my own mistakes. But you are what you eat. Input. Output. So deal breaker.

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